It is true that historical attractions and museums are by far the most popular sites with travellers rather than local residents. There are several reasons for this, and I think that governments need to take steps to attract more locals to visit these locations.
To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why these destinations attract mainly visitors instead of local people. First of all, travelling to new cultural and historical areas, tourists are likely to acquire knowledge and cultures from these regions. As a result, the vast majority of people tend to go to historical locations such as Ho Chi Minh museums which have numerous memories stuffs related to their historic nations. Secondly, because the layout of the museums has no change through many years, these attractions are less attractive to locals who might have visited at least once in their younger years.
Despite these arguments above, I believe that measures could be used by the governments to tackle this issue. One measure is that the governments should promote local people to visit these historical attractions through exhibiting historical stuffs in different ways. For example, it is more appealing if people are able to gain knowledge by observing visual image or listening to guided tours instead of reading books. Another measure is that the authorities should allocate national revenues to spend on these locations in order to enhance the quality of infrastructures and services. This is not only to bring more local inhabitants to visit museums but also preserve their region’s cultural heritage.
In conclusion, although several reasons are mentioned above, I think that various measures can be taken by the governments to mitigate with the problems.
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- Studies show that many criminals have a low of education For this reason people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison Do you agree or disagree 67
- Topic: Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d at least once in their younger years. Despite these arguments above, I believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27956989247 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75162856697 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9431664966 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414234629949 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14148303891 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831013646185 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229215693044 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104424275076 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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