Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view.
Many people argue that fees at cultural and tourist places should be equal for national and international visitors. I believe that foreigners should be charged more as compared to native tourists.
As the influx of foreign currency boost countries' economy, it is natural to raise prices at tourist places for international citizens. Moreover many countries have adopted such policies to enhance infrastructure and Employment through revenue generated from tourism. For example, Sri Lanka and Malaysia are Asian nations generating maximum revenue from tourism.
Another most important factor considered is the loss of local and regional people's interest in culture and tourism if heavy taxes are implemented. Admittedly for sustaining cultural and tourist attraction combined efforts of local people and administrators are needed to make Ek Sach places attractive and exotic. If charges for local people are raised which will lead to a detrimental effect on the moral of local and national people. For example, the Amarnath Yatra conducted in the month of August and September 2012 saw a drop in a number of participation when heavy taxes imposed on the passengers.
Lastly, tourists from developed countries are frequent visitors to tourist destinations. Hence it does not impact them significantly as compared to native citizens when prices are hiked. For example, the Deccan Odyssey train run by the Indian government is a tourist attraction meant only for international visitors because ticket rates for many Indians are beyond their pockets.
To conclude I firmly adhere to my belief because the increasing cost for international visitors will only produce a positive impact for local citizens which will ultimately boost nations' overall development.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: much participation; a good deal of participation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, moreover, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55390334572 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89803597498 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.718678886 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189112771674 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777381936404 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612874458892 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113511530686 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786665165312 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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