Scientists have been warning for many years about importance of protecting the environment and that we must
limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings many people do not do this. What are the reasons and
how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting environment?
Despite warnings from scientists for decades to safeguard environment, many people ignore such warnings and
continue using energy sources in routine lives. There are myriad of reasons attributed for such careless behavior,
which warrants effective steps to address it.
As world is witnessing drastic climate changes since few decades, scientists have proven that limiting utilization
of energy sources and conserving them by applying alternative energy sources will protect environment in some
way. However, many people continue to waste energy sources and act irresponsibly. The most prominent reason is
selfish and helpless attitude among masses. Many believes that individual citizen could not prove beneficial to
conserve natural energy resources and the onus lies on the government to protect it. Hence, they lack vision and
education to take effective steps towards environment protection. For example, during traffic at a signal, many
individuals' fail to switch off vehicles when halted.
Another, most important factor, high cost of alternative energy sources, which is beyond scope of common man affordability quotient. For example, Solar panels installed at rooftop of apartments and houses for heating water requires a great deal of investment. Similarly, new innovation in the form of electric cars and bicycles are very costly and not amenable for average middle class families.
However, to tackle climate crisis and global warming, education, motivation and implementation is necessary at
individual and community levels. Schools and colleges should conduct practical classes to educate pupil and
transform them into a responsible citizen towards environment. At community level, various social, cultural and
public programmes' should be conducted to create awareness and sensitivity towards natural energy resources.
For example, in India, during many festivals hoardings containing messages for energy conservation are
displayed. Lastly, government should mobilize funds in order to make alternative energy resources cheap.
To conclude, to make planet earth habitable for future generations, each one has to adopt strong and effective
methods to safeguard our energy sources and limit further climate crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, lastly, similarly, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99691358025 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81022713374 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645061728395 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1917475954 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.294117647 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230041483187 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683138404748 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748341739729 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645949434144 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708569367775 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.