Some people think that good health is a basis human need, so the madical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages.
It is believed that health plays an integral role in people’s life. In recent years, privately operated services have emerged as an alternative to public health care and gained in popularity for some reasons. Personally, in spite of some drawbacks, the benefits of private health care system seem to be more significant.
On the one hand, private medical treatment brings about several disadvantages. First, patients have to pay more for services in privately owned hospitals than in public health agencies. When governments do not introduce restrictions on treatment costs in the hospitals and clinic run by profit-making companies, as well as they are equiped with a lot of cutting-edge technology, many private institutions are possible to increase fees for services such as prescription charges or using machine in operating theatre. This has prevented the underprivileged from being treated in private healthcare system. The second drawback is that with the aim of earning profit, private hospitals might pay more attention to the quantity rather than the quality. For example, they can employ less qualified and less experienced medical practitioners, which results in the unpleasantness of patients.
On the other hand, privately operated healthcare institutions also have their own advantages. First, private hospitals provide patients with faster services. Unlike public health services, where people have to wait for a long time to be diagnosed and treated, patients are served professionally and speedily when going to private hospitals, for example, to go for regular check-ups. Second, private healthcare institutions can be an alternative for public hospital in remote areas as a way to relief the authorities’ burden. Therefore, governments will be able to allocate resources to other more important things, such as stabilising the economy and politics. In addition, people in ethnic minorities who barely receive primary health care will gain access to contemporary medical treatments easily.
In conclusion, I completely agree with those who argue that private healthcare system caries more considerable advantaged than drawbacks. Thus, people should take out private health insurance to reach better health care.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70238095238 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12598623893 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3848974715 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.705882353 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24264049848 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846225306719 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634302780502 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170721499845 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041100538482 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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