Many people tend to assume that as having good health condition is a truly significant issue for everyone thus, medical care services should be managed by non-profit companies. This essay will discuss why private medical cares have more adverse consequences to the society rather than bring about its benefits.
There is a merit of private health care. The main issue is that many patients could receive more attentive and comfortable services or medical programmes. It means that compared to large hospitals organised by non-profit businesses or governments, there are fewer patients generally due to the high cost of medical care fess. So, quick and immediate cures or surgeries as well as perhaps, individual-oriented medical programmes for each person who is injured can be available.
However, if profit-making enterprises govern the national medical services, there will be severe social concerns. The most detrimental issue is that it is significantly hard for the underprivileged to have a good quality of medical services as a part of welfare plans anymore due to their financial problems. Therefore, many people ill would be more likely to suffer from serious disorders and illnesses and to matter worse, might die without any medical aids. However, since the establishments and the wealthy do not be affected by tremendous costs for seeing doctors or being in the hospital, the gulf between the rich and the poor could increase severely too.
In conclusion, I am convinced that there are more disadvantages of private medical health services, rather than its positive influences in our society because of unwanted social problems like the gap between the affluent and the disadvantaged.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36940298507 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00047102191 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5971361881 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290037400472 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114428942603 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776129705197 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170086601784 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613041099165 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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