Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays sport has become commonplace in many countries. Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sports, while others feel that people should have the freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. In my opinion, people should be allowed to participate in such sports as long as they know the dangers involved.
On the one hand, players always face life-threatening perils such as skydiving, motor-racing, and water skiing. Although these dangerous sports always come with protective gear, unfortunately the equipment might malfunction, resulting in injuries or even death. Therefore, some people argue that it should be banned because no one will perform it again. This way the government can ensure its people's safety. Proponents of the banning of dangerous sports believe that human life is more valuable than the momentary pleasures or thrills brought by these sports. They believe that the majority of young people engage in adventures. The majority of them are not fully aware of the consequences and perform extreme sports out of curiosity or for fun, so a ban on extreme sports will certainly discourage them from participating.
On the other hand, each individual should have the freedom to decide if they want to participate in dangerous sports. It's an invasion of personal privacy if the government bans those sports. Additionally, many people choose to play extreme sports; most have practiced a lot before actually attempting it. Therefore, banning extreme sports will affect their dreams and passions. For these reasons, I believe dangerous sports should not be prohibited.
In conclusion, although some extreme sports can seriously endanger scammers' lives, I believe that they should not be banned because it can affect people's privacy and passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80964083695 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.47628664 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433961059617 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148783745483 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12705088955 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307013867403 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136906738144 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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