Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Dangerous sports have been a controversial topic of debate. People believe extreme sports should not be banned because they are a hobby and passion. Whereas another group of people thinks that it is very dangerous and can be very risky. With me, I agree with both comments and explain my view below.
On the one hand, dangerous sports are a sport that can help athletes release pressure and regain the inherent emotions of a person. This is a feeling of fear, excitement or nervousness instead of trying to keep your emotions stable all the time. In addition, extreme sports help them discover their hidden talents rather than wasting them somewhere or not discovering them at all. For instance, an Australian woman with a strong passion for surfing, a dangerous sport. She has never given up even though she has severe pain or light injuries and still loves passionately it. Despite being injured in the past, she always appears to be very strong.
On the other hand, extreme sports are always very risky and fatal accidents are inevitable. Not only that, if there are serious injuries and treated, there are still inevitable side effects. Not only that, the hazard of those sports also brings psychological damage that is very difficult to reverse for those who play extreme sports. For example, around the beginning of this year, there were many fatal accidents involving large displacement motor racers. These accidents caused unimaginable consequences.
Ultimately, if dangerous sports are banned or not, it doesn't matter if they are kept safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... dangerous sports are banned or not, it doesnt matter if they are kept safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08984375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55603402492 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8368188083 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233246899443 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725863667764 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752736270336 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154234619345 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098122491794 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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