Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, think that people should have the freedom to choose sports activities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As sports were divided to various parts, some of them may cause bad consequences to people, there has been much discussion about whether governments should enforce some laws to forbid dangerous sports or give citizens freedom to choose. As far as I am concerned, an ever-changing society has obligation to accept these sports.
On the one hand, some sports indeed have a certain risk factor while people do not have talent for it or have received the professional train. For example, it is true that numerous maximal exercises play a vital role among the youth, and they may run at the top of skyscrapers, jumping from the gap to another gap which without any protection. As a consequence, these sports are considered as the most dangerous behaviors, emerging kinds of terrible news from it.
On the other hand, there is another side which we should still pay attention to, significantly. Sports have been a part of our daily life previously, which as a power to ourselves, hence we have right to decide that we do it or not. For government, having duties to prevent human from taking any risks, however, the approach of ban can only arise their anger. For instance, the administration can guide the people, disseminating the knowledge about the safe sports. That way is definite better than taking tough measure.
In my view, the public policy should be more considerate and this is why governments cannot purply ban risky sports. Furthermore, sports sure-enough has a positive impact on the society, in contrast, it also have some dangerous sports. For this reason, if the people unlikely to do this, launching awareness campaigns by the government is the best choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96441281139 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78969058801 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8302518317 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280997646509 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835445323827 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616161448256 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162968463543 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546745563049 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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