Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?
A lot of people in the world are out of jobs or even don’t have a home. Therefore, there is an opinion that the government should support these people. I completely disagree with this statement because too much money will be spent with almost zero changes.
To start with, it costs a lot of government money to help people in need. In fact, this money is taken from taxes collected from all citizens. Obviously, many people don’t want to pay for other people. For instance, according to the statistics of the Russian Statistics Bureau for 2018, almost 8 billion rubles were spent on the homeless. This is too much money for people that don't even improve the country’s economy.
Furthermore, supporting homeless people can even increase their number. When people without a job get enough money to live, they don’t look for jobs as actively as they would have looked if they didn’t have money. To illustrate, when the state of Russia enacted material aid for unemployed people in 2016, the number of unemployed people increased by 20% in the next year. Therefore, with the government’s help, the situation even worsens.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the opinion that the government should help support people out of jobs owing to enormous but worthless budgets that support spending.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... This is too much money for people that dont even improve the country’s economy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61429258373 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2991958449 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254124590724 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101340709364 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665976184809 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166479403259 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322478518004 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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