Each person has a different sensibility for any particular thing. Same in this matter, certain people believe, that investing in arts is the misuse of the government money instead there are various possessions, those are important rather than crafts. Besides many of appreciating government for working in artistry. I admit that devote to arts is constructive for the attraction of the world it helps to increase the economy indirectly but besides I never denied that some investment on artistic things just ruined the money. Whatever fact, this essay will elaborate in below sections.
Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people of country show interest on it like art galleries and paintings, movies etc. In a few countries, sports are more appealing then arts, Instance people like to follow cricketers, which has more followers than sculpture.
To begins with opposed, the world's population increased rapidly but jobs are limited, so mainly unemployment the biggest thread in the current world, in this situation the government should create more opportunity for workless people rather than funding amounts on the artworks.
Now turn to the educational department, as we know that most of the students are studying in government schools and they are far behind then private ones because of new technical or modern studies not appear in the government schools. In this circumstances, the regime should work.
After that Health system, which country can grow without the health of the civilisation? another big problem those are needful to change and improve.
The government should pay more for health departments because there are many regions where people have not to access the proper medication from the government hospitals.
To conclude, making country beautiful is not regretful but to meet the needs of countries peoples is a vast act. Investment on art would only benefit in a small minority but for enhancing the capability of human is larger and the government should think for the country people, not a sculpture.
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Each person has a different sensibility for any particular thing. Same in this matter, certain people believe, that investing in arts is the misuse of the government money instead there are various possessions, those are important rather than crafts. Besides many of appreciating government for working in artistry. I admit that devote to arts is constructive for the attraction of the world it helps to increase the economy indirectly but besides I never denied that some investment on artistic things just ruined the money. Whatever fact, this essay will elaborate in below sections.
Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people of country show interest on it like art galleries and paintings, movies etc. In a few countries, sports are more appealing then arts, Instance people like to follow cricketers, which has more followers than sculpture.
To begins with opposed, the world's population increased rapidly but jobs are limited, so mainly unemployment the biggest thread in the current world, in this situation the government should create more opportunity for workless people rather than funding amounts on the artworks.
Now turn to the educational department, as we know that most of the students are studying in government schools and they are far behind then private ones because of new technical or modern studies not appear in the government schools. In this circumstances, the regime should work.
After that Health system, which country can grow without the health of the civilisation? another big problem those are needful to change and improve.
The government should pay more for health departments because there are many regions where people have not to access the proper medication from the government hospitals.
To conclude, making country beautiful is not regretful but to meet the needs of countries peoples is a vast act. Investment on art would only benefit in a small minority but for enhancing the capability of human is larger and the government should think for the country people, not a sculpture.
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- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education 87
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disagree? 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'interpolates'.
Suggestion: interpolates
...borate in below sections. Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'interpolates'.
Suggestion: interpolates
...borate in below sections. Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ew countries, sports are more appealing then arts, Instance people like to follow cr...
^^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ulpture. To begins with opposed, the worlds population increased rapidly but jobs a...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ot appear in the government schools. In this circumstances, the regime should work. ...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...without the health of the civilisation? another big problem those are needful to change...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the country people, not a sculpture. . Each person has a different sens...
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Line 20, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'interpolates'.
Suggestion: interpolates
...borate in below sections. Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'interpolates'.
Suggestion: interpolates
...borate in below sections. Government interpolate the money on arts worthy if the people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 186, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ew countries, sports are more appealing then arts, Instance people like to follow cr...
^^^^
Line 22, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ulpture. To begins with opposed, the worlds population increased rapidly but jobs a...
^^^^^^
Line 24, column 239, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ot appear in the government schools. In this circumstances, the regime should work. ...
^^^^
Line 26, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...without the health of the civilisation? another big problem those are needful to change...
^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e country people, not a sculpture. .
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Line 40, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not a sculpture. .
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 38.0 8.3376753507 456% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3528.0 1615.20841683 218% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 656.0 315.596192385 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37804878049 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78898527318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.295731707317 0.561755894193 53% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1045.8 506.74238477 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9684373287 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209685282255 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665484939082 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567292729746 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879667291624 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521347812027 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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