FACTORS LEADING TO SUCCESS HAS BECOME A METTER OF CONCERN IN PRESENT SCENARIO. A SEGMENT OF SOCIETY HIGHLY FAVOURS HARD EFFORT AND COURAGE, DECISION WHILE OTHERS HAVE CONTRASTING VIEWS. HOWEVER, THIS ESSAY SHALL SCRUTINIZE BOTH VIEWS IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH.
ONE ONE HAND, ACHIEVEMENT DEPENDS ON PERSON'S STRENGTH AND SERIOUSNESS FOR THEIR WORK, THEREFORE WITHOUT HAVING THESE KEYS, IT IS HARD TO ACHIEVE GOALS EASILY. TO ILLUSTRATE MOST OF THE BIG COMPANIES PREFER TO HIRE STRONG MINDED CANDIDATES WITH ESTABLE CAPABILITY. IN ADDITION, BY PRATICING THESE EFFORTS, ONE CAN BECOME VERY SKILLFUL TO OBTAIN TOWERING VICTORY. FOR INSTANCE, MOST OF THE FAMOUS PEOPLE SUCH AS '' TATA GROUP FOUNDER ''MR RATAN TATA''EXPERIENCED SEVERAL TROUBLES AND FAILURE IN HIS LIFE BUT HE NEVER LOSES HIS HOPE, AND NOW HE IS ONE OF RICHEST PERSON IN THE WORLD.
ON THE OTHER HAND, SOME RECKON THAT PEOPLE MUST HAVE SOME FACTORS SUCH AS STRONG BACKGROUND, FORTUNE, LUCK SO ON TO BE SUCCESSFUL. TO SOME EXTENT IT MAY HELP TO REACH THE HIGH LEVEL, ALTHOUGH MANY PEOPLE GET PROPER SUPPORT FROM FAMILY AND GUIDANCE CAN FLOURISH THEM BUT NOT FOR A LONG TIME, NEVERTHELESS, HARD WORK WOULD PASS OVER SUCH KIND OF SUCCESS. FOR EXAMPLE, MANY YOUNGSTER FROM RICH FAMILIES WOULD BE SUCCESSFUL IN LIFE AS PER AS EYES OF OTHERS. WHILE GOD EDUCATION AND WILLPOWER TO BE ALL ESSENTIAL FOR BEING SUCCESSFUL.
TO SUM UP, IT IS OBVIOUS THAT HARD WORK AND DETERMINATION ARE MAJOR FACTORS TO ENSURE SUCCESS. HOWEVER, AS PER AS MY CONCERN, A PERSON SUCCESS CAN NOT BE DETERMINED ON A SINGLE BASIS ALL FACTORS ARE INDISPENSABLE.
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
- In some countries fast food restaurant and companies give money to school provided that the schools promote their school children products to school children What do you think is the positive and negative in the development of children 94
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: ONE
...BOTH VIEWS IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH. ONE ONE HAND, ACHIEVEMENT DEPENDS ON PERSONS ST...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...TANCE, MOST OF THE FAMOUS PEOPLE SUCH AS TATA GROUP FOUNDER MR RATAN TATAEXPERIEN...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...H AS STRONG BACKGROUND, FORTUNE, LUCK SO ON TO BE SUCCESSFUL. TO SOME EXTENT IT M...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...FOR A LONG TIME, NEVERTHELESS, HARD WORK WOULD PASS OVER SUCH KIND OF SUCCESS. FO...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun YOUNGSTER seems to be countable; consider using: 'MANY youngsters'.
Suggestion: MANY youngsters
...OVER SUCH KIND OF SUCCESS. FOR EXAMPLE, MANY YOUNGSTER FROM RICH FAMILIES WOULD BE SUCCESSFUL ...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ICH FAMILIES WOULD BE SUCCESSFUL IN LIFE AS PER AS EYES OF OTHERS. WHILE GOD EDUC...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... EYES OF OTHERS. WHILE GOD EDUCATION AND WILLPOWER TO BE ALL ESSENTIAL FOR BEING ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96240601504 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69714245471 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5493312163 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312798004963 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993985258755 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706791375191 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177929744257 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787604122064 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.