Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether extreme sports should be banned or individuals are free to choose their own sports. In my view, I lean towards the latter idea.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people request a ban on dangerous sports. One reason is that they are afraid of the potential harm these activities pose. For example, when an F1 car crashes while running in high speed, there might be a chance that the shattered debris of the car fly into the crowd and cause a severe casualty. Likewise, if a skydiver could not open his parachute and free fall, his body may actually hit people who are walking on the ground. This is why some individuals would support the prohibition of extreme activities to protect themselves from the potential threat.
However, I side with those who think that people have the rights to participate in this type of sports. One reason to support my standpoint is that restricting individuals from doing dangerous sports means the governments are going against the law of freedom. In fact, each and every person is in control of his decision to do any activities which make him satisfied and happy as long as he does not intend to harm others. The interference from governments, therefore, violates people’s rights to make such a decision. As for the potential threat, even a regular pastime such as soccer can also harm the surrounding viewers. If a soccer player shoots the ball out of the field with a strong force, the ball could hit someone in the face and break his facial bones.
In conclusion, I believe that people should be allowed to choose whatever activities they want to participate as they have the freedom to do so and even a non-extreme sport could bring potential threats to others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether extreme sports should be banned or indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, while, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79867986799 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68193599182 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8784075677 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253078099618 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778942660402 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756648222942 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151620286499 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300682985425 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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