Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
There are different views about whether governments should outlaw extreme sports or people should be free to involve in any sports activities if they so wish. While individuals are not in favour of the risks, I partly agree with the view that taking part in extreme sports is private optional freedom.
On the one hand, it is obvious that governments should impose an official ban on extreme sports on safety grounds. This is because of in the most these activities, participants often lack the highly-specialised equipment and especially the good judgement of experienced experts, resulting in only minor errors can be the cause of serious and even life-threatening injuries. Another reason for this is that people often are indifferent to sensible precautions which will minimise the risk of accidents for everyone involved. Such irresponsible behaviour can only be prevented by banning these sports.
On the other hand, I concur with those who argue that people should be free to do extreme sports. Firstly, overcoming fear of the most dangerous sports is a necessary measure for human’s ability in terms of conquering harsh nature, which also is the first step on the road to success of each person. furthermore, if people participate in extreme sports with the express purposes, they can be proud of their country. For instance, three young men proud feelings when they became the first ever Vietnamese persons to successfully conquer and raise their national flag on “the world roof-top, Everest”. Secondly, most of these dangerous sports, which are done with other people, increasing frequency social interaction. For example, you are more likely to go skateboarding or jump out of a plane with a friend. This will help increase the bond between the two of you, and it will also give you many benefits of socialization.
In conclusion, it seems to me that instead of banning extreme sports, governments should enact laws concerning dangerous sports actions to make sure participants adhere to the recommended safety procedures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... on the road to success of each person. furthermore, if people participate in extreme sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28353658537 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98265951926 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1303356579 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.785714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23613085417 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083519069438 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765065505645 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155481950416 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554992192983 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.