Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Pollution and housing plays a basic worse role in environment. It is frequently believed that, pollution and housing troubles should be focused by an authority to people stopping sickness and hazardous disease. However, I partially disagree with this statement following paragraph will intend to analyse notion.
Environment pollution and lack of housing should not be focused by government, because there are many problems for prevent illness and disease that it is required to stare. For example, as I am living in India, most of slum areas people are suffering on air pollution and water pollution problems such problems may affect on disease such as, malaria,diarrhoea or swan, if government looks this type of problem then it is splendid aid to people health.
Despite having a glance on to reducing natural pollution and housing, policy should pass some strict rules on medical this means, it will great impact on people health because of rules doctor cannot treat patients in a weird way and this can make splendid health and ensure such worst disease.
Even though environmental problems and shortage of housing may effect at some extent. It can damage people hope due to those kind of problems individuals cannot live with better hope and because of this number of masses may hunt of serval disease.To example, South African people are suffering with skin problems due to their hope.
In conclusion, if other different approach should be taken by government such as rules, medical care, worst areas still environmental pollution and housing scarcity are not major problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32156862745 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68881803155 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3782941379 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.777777778 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364555539097 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147274776886 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535659319152 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184096764751 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527326829349 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.