Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think
other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give
your opinion?
There are lots of ways to determine the factors bringing success. While some believe that appearance and money are the key factors contributing to one present's success, others support for hard work and determination. I think both of the ideas partly contribute to the achievement someone reachs in their whole life.
On the one hand, having money and appearance can speed up our work. Getting enough budget helps people afford all expenses that lead to success. For example, the family who is able to let their child study abroad helps them easily reach their purpose in life than students studying at a normal university. Another factor is an appearance that in such society which prefers to aesthetic qualities and outlooks like today, it is always better for people who leave a good impression because of their appearance.
However, I think that people can not achieve their goal without hard word and determination. It is always fair that people constantly working and studying towards their dream get a satisfying result and reach a certain point in their career path. Even if you are talented that you are able to clean skills and knowledge more quickly, you probably can not achieve anything without determination.
In conclusion, it is extremely lucky if you already have money or appearance. However, that is not enough because eventually, the key factors deciding the success are hard work and determination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10300429185 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70320858633 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6516900798 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264296619218 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996485181121 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729647832735 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165621037005 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969439569868 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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