Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion
Opinions differ as to whether it is beneficial for a host nation to organize a global sports event or not. Personally, I think both views are reasonable as each has its own advantages.
It is definitely true that holding a worldwide sports competition brings the host country economical and diplomatic benefits. In terms of the former, it fosters national tourism development and creates more job opportunities for host citizens. For instance, in Olympic Sydney 2000, over 1,6 million visitors traveled to Australia from which around 100 000 new jobs were booming. As to the ladder, this event strengthens the solidarity and co-operation between the host and other countries. All attendees make full use of their resources for the preparation and operation of the event.
However, the financial burden and current pandemic transmission are two alarming issues for the Host National Sports Committee. Government has to spend a huge amount of money on infrastructure renovation and promotion campaigns. This might pose a potential threat to the unforeseeable economic crisis due to the imbalance of governmental budget control. Furthermore, the ongoing Covid pandemic is also a major concern for the host authorities. If the epidemic prevention and precaution are not thoroughly taken, this event may become an uncontrollable outbreak of the world because of the rapid community spread.
Therefore, I believe that in addition to the merits in economy and diplomacy, there are two primary drawbacks that hosting an international sports event has. If the host committee minimizes the adverse aspect by adequate budget management, this event will gain tremendous success in national development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether it is beneficial for a host nation to o...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... for a host nation to organize a global sports event or not. Personally, I think both ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...efinitely true that holding a worldwide sports competition brings the host country eco...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endous success in national development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47709923664 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08940643857 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660305343511 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1046788061 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222636887884 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708057405236 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489301030884 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141451428661 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546873058235 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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