Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Hosting an international sports competition is a valued responsibility of each country because of the advantages of it. However, the opponents of this view say that the government of this country have to spend much funds on a sports event.
On the one hand, helding a global sports events plays an important role in tourism. To put it in another way, many tourists and sports fans around the world will have a trip to the host nation to follow the event. Another benefit is that among economic aspects, sports merchandising becomes a multi-billion dollar business with purchasing the sports T-shirts and sports equipments. In addition, many services such as hotels, restaurants and entertainment areas have a great opportunity to develop.
On the other hand, the argument of this issue is that the government must spend much money on repairing stadiums and the sports facilities. In other words, this is one of the reasons that lead to the lack of the funding in Covid-19 pandemic in some nations. Moreover, the status of environmental pollution becomes more dangerous and serious. For example, according to Environmental News, the carbon dioxide emissions of host nation have a tendency of increasing while the plants in the forests have a risk of extinction.
In conclusion, the host country can advertise about the culture and attractive destinations to millions of people on the planet. Besides, the problems about funding and environment are the huge challenges with the host nation of an international sports events
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...overnment of this country have to spend much funds on a sports event. On the one ...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s country have to spend much funds on a sports event. On the one hand, helding a gl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21457489879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98407208255 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7377957622 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227337862496 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077347521513 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506758121903 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139650652261 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470590562653 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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