Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is thought that it would be advantageous for the nation where an international sports event is held, whereas some people consider it bad. In my opinion, hosting a big event can brings both several benefits and drawbacks to the country, but I think that strengthens would outweight weaknesses.
On the one hand, the nation would face several potential problems. Firstly, holding an international event needs many people and a huge amount of money to prepare from decorations, places, food and accommodations. Secondly, people from all over the world would come to this countries to take part in this event, which can be a good chance for infectious diseases, COVID-19, for example, at present.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that it would bring a plethora opportunies to the host country. Firstly, many people can find an employment due to this event, for example they can become managers or workers who work to prepare this massive event. Secondly, more people traveling to this country to attend the event means the number of tourists can increase significantly, which contributes to national economy. Finally, foreigners can know more about this country's traditions and cultures through visiting some tourist attractions and joining some traditional activities. I reckon that it can be a good chance to develop if the nation makes good use of this event
In conclusion, although there are still some disadvantages. hosting a big event like sports event certainly brings benefits to the host nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e from all over the world would come to this countries to take part in this event, w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hosting
...ugh there are still some disadvantages. hosting a big event like sports event certainly...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...disadvantages. hosting a big event like sports event certainly brings benefits to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, for example, i reckon, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87239659937 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575510204082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2216124485 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253304079684 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102058683556 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598180505215 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174171869935 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463680910461 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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