Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Climate change is a current issue that is being discussed by many world leaders all over the globe. To believe that finding a way to live with climate change is possible is not entirely true.

To start with, climate change affects the topography of various geographic locations. Excessive heating can cause icebergs to melt thereby disturbing the natural habitat of various fauna such as polar bears, seals and penguins. The change in natural habitats can cause indigenous species to go extinct which in turn can cause havoc to the natural food chain. Upsetting the delicate balance of nature can cause rapid declines or sudden booms in populations of specific species.

To continue, changes caused to flora and fauna will affect human beings as we are directly or indirectly linked to the same. Forest fires caused due to heat, cities destroyed due to heavy rains, animals going extinct due to climate changes, spread of diseases due to the increase in certain pests and global warming can cause humans to suffer various consequences. Food and water will become scarce with time. Civilization will be affected by various natural disasters that will occur in abundance with climate change.

Based on the analysis, we can conclude that living with climate change is not the best possible option. Human beings must find ways to fight climate change by making small changes within the house and extend the same to the world outside. The larger picture must be kept in mind and people must unite to alleviate the world from problems that arise as a consequence of climate change.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in populations of specific species. To continue, changes caused to flora and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, such as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0608365019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37453613078 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2025640265 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104683086705 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492251924572 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462595529694 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773196454943 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448238219557 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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