Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every living organisms lives are influenced by the weather system. Due to different types of pollutions, global warming and other factors the climate begins to change. A few peoples has the opinion that finding a living method according to the climate method is the better choice than that of controlling climatic changes.

Climate plays the significant role in the food products we consume daily to survive. Though we have a plethora varaities of food across the world, every country will choose their own variety of food which suits their climatic condition. Frequent climate change will also impacts the cultivation of crops. Mostly, farmers select the crops to be cultivated based on the seasons. For example, In India, the northern half remains to be cold and dry, so the farmers will cultivate wheat whereas, in southern half will have good rain and also it remains warm in few months of the year so the farmers in the south will choose rice. Eventhough we are in the technically developed world, there is no alternative found for food.

Not only humans, but also other living organisms will also affect by this climatic change. Most of the animal breed based on the climate only as a consequence of climatic change the particular animal may move to the verge of extinction. Furthermore, It will also affect the trees and plants across the world. Factually, the average life span of trees are around 60 years and also they will grow based on the climate and soil types alone. If the climate started to change throught the life span of the tree means there is high probability of extinction. Trees are the major oxygen producer of the world, humans inhale oxygen to live. As a result, there is no possibilty for the survival of the living oraganisms in the world.

In conclusion, by the above discussion I strongly oppose the opinion of finding the method to live according to the climate change. If we choosed there is less probability to get high success rate. Because it requires reconstruction of whole world based on the climate changed which includes food, trees etc.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'live'.
Suggestion: live
Every living organisms lives are influenced by the weather system. D...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'impact'
Suggestion: impact
...tion. Frequent climate change will also impacts the cultivation of crops. Mostly, farme...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to rice'
Suggestion: to rice
...so the farmers in the south will choose rice. Eventhough we are in the technically d...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t also other living organisms will also affect by this climatic change. Most of the anima...
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Line 9, column 439, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed on the climate and soil types alone. If the climate started to change throught ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52864466802 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502824858757 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5126625312 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5789473684 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129842376232 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463803984743 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300638975147 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942802290956 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275073006822 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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