Climate change is a growing concern among all countries all around the world. Due to this fact, people have to face many difficulties and many reasons working behind this. Moreover, the world is now trying to prevent natural calamities in various ways. In the world, a certain segment of people goes against these steps and suggested that we should used to these incidents. I completely disagree with the statement and in the following paragraphs, I will give arguments for my disagreement.
On the one hand, according to scientists and environmentalists after industrialization, the climate began to change, and now it has turned into a disastrous form. For example, in 2021, the UK faces a great flood which is happened within 100 years. In addition, the other 7 European countries face devastating wildfire, scientists claimed that it was taken place due to the heatwave and many people died for it. The researchers warned that if the countries will not take measures the world will not be a habitat for the people. Likewise, millions of people died from diseases that are affected because of air and water pollution.
Moreover, following a research paper if the temperature rises at the current rate the 15% of the world will go underwater within 2050 and all the glaciers of the pole will be melted. Therefore, as in contemporary times, people face a pandemic all around the world, and due to the melting of the ice will face more in the future. According to the researchers, they find more 33 types of viruses in Greenland ice plates which characteristics are totally unknown whether they are infectious or not.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, it is clear that without giving preventive measures we can not live in the world and in the future, the world will turn into a desert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90228013029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87054785489 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7787094579 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103560875585 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358253320106 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256787135756 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671203179824 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376198862288 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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