Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The issue in the flavor of students should study in single-sex schools is highly controversial. Because some people think that being educated in mixed schools is more beneficial. It is my firm belief that the two kinds of schools possess their advantages due to some reasons.
In terms of single-sex education models, they probably limit the distribution of student’s concentration on the relationship between males and females. As a result, the students are prevented from being distracted and encouraged to pay almost their attention to studies that lead to better academic performances. Furthermore, the educational administration also becomes easier in which schools are likely to select liberally subjects in curriculums without gender prejudice.
On the other hand, some educationalists argue that this way is inefficient. Because they find that education being preparation of the future career and obviously in the next stage when involving in working to make ends meet, they have to work in a mixed-sex environment. Therefore, it is highly recommended that students should live and operate together at an early age so that they possibly avoid some unexpected conflicts.
In my way of thinking, I prefer to study in schools enrolling both boys and girls. Since I believe that this kind of school will provide about a prospect of realistic situations that I may face on my daily communication.
In conclusion, both men and women gain equal educational opportunities. Given a right to freely choose an expectant school, students should take the issue regarding defining whether schools they can take advantage of under consideration carefully.
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- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le-sex schools is highly controversial. Because some people think that being educated i...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... schools enrolling both boys and girls. Since I believe that this kind of school will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44186046512 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16330365197 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624031007752 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6163088195 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10575278871 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426309589409 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431797236645 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058230917023 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205868419046 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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