some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s modern world, acquiring correct information plays a crucial role in the efficacious presence of us in society. While some argue it can be obtained via asking around, others are concerned that we can through exercising the internet, social media and books achieve to information. The aim of this essay is to explore two opposing viewpoints, and then render my own perspective.
On the one hand, there are people who claim that banking on people’s information is sufficient. If enquirers are not able to find sagacious person, i.e. who is a professional expertise in the field of question, imparting erroneous or flawed knowledge to others will possibly cause irreparable damage to their reputation. For instance, some presidents always say they tackle the phenomenon of unemployment of the youth, whilst it is crystal clear which is incorrect, and this wrong information probably originate from his dilettante and unwitting counselors.
On the other hand, some people argue that they are more convenient to surf the Net or take themselves avail of books, magazines and etc. to find answer of their questions. To them it is not only a searchable and fast way, but also the wisest and the most prudent method because they can communicate with more people. On top of these, people can get their required information just through putting enquiry in web forum to know others opinions. As a result of which, people will tend to reach to the correct information as well as fortify and underpin their claim when presenting.
Taking the above mentioned points into account, it is my belief that the best method is to use the internet and books to get information. It is because we can acquire more other perspective about our question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ke themselves avail of books, magazines and etc. to find answer of their questions. To t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, as for, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0830449827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87192229081 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9235241484 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286176841225 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841106245019 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054679024049 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152263545287 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302082064351 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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