Essay topics: some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Well, some individuals believe that parents should teach their children how to be a positive part of their community, while others assume that this responsibility should be taken up by the school as it is a place where children learn. According to my opinion, parents should consider this responsibility instead of relying on the school.
People think that it is the sole duty of parents to guide their children on how to be good citizens. they hold this view because it is total responsibility on the children's father and mother. A famous quote home is the first school and parents are first teachers. There are many things that children learn from home and parents. The most significant thing is that children most often follow their parent footprints and they tend to copy them. To give an example, if a father gives some food to a poor family, his children will most definitely learn that.
On the other hand, schools cannot replace the role and responsibility of parents because it manages a large number of children and every child has own sacrament. The school has made to gain knowledge, not only to become a good citizen. For example, if all the schools teach about how to be a good citizen of society, who will teach the essential subject. The requirement of not only moral values but also education is necessary for a good citizen. So we have no right to say that the school best place to learn it.
Hence, this essay has discussed both perspectives and it still stands on the initial view parents should be the leading this part of this job and should not expect this role from the school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
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...ildren will most definitely learn that. On the other hand, schools cannot replac...
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...nsibility of parents because it manages a large number of children and every child has own sacram...
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Suggestion: school the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, still, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6914893617 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53089406681 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9108973161 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977879638897 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330162504908 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325517213719 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632233613264 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224232614924 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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