Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The majority of people hold the opinion that we should spend our spare time on developing the mind with some helpful activities such as reading and brain improvement games. In the meantime, the other group believe we should have free time to refresh our mind from working burdens without any specific activities. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the first point of view for many reasons.
On the one hand, leisure time is precious for many people to broaden their knowledge and improve brain development, especially young generation. First and foremost, we can take advantages of evenings and weekends to expand our horizons in many aspects of lives. Since our knowledge is a tiny sand in the ocean, updating information from multiple sources, such as books and magazines, equips people the necessary skills and basic acknowledgement to have a better life. In addition to this, it is not only work but also other factors which play a vital role in our success. Playing games such as puzzle is useful for the brain, which can stimulate it and help it more sensitive in problem solving.
On the other hand, there are many people think that off-from-work period should be spent on recovery from fatigue and tiredness. If some people have a heavy financial pressure on their shoulders, they are totally busy with their jobs and family affairs. As a result, they have a little time for themselves, therefore, spare time is really important to help them escape from bustle and hustle lives. Moreover, it also depends on the health situation of each person. Some individuals are not enough healthy to work for a long time, they need relax to recharge more energy. For instance, some people have chronic headaches, they usually spend their time doing some simple entertainment activities and avoid some tasks that require a lot of effort to accomplish.
In conclusion, I totally agree that what we do in spare time can decide our lives in the future, however, there are many factors that affect our choices and activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97653958944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5983927191 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8236638892 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255393135191 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817571390415 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067565538476 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142891934265 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605404822608 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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