Write about the following topic. In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem?You should write at least 250 words.

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Write about the following topic.

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?

You should write at least 250 words.

Submitted by mytran234 on Wed, 04/03/2019 - 10:21

Agricultural development has positive impacts on human being, however, there still remains starvation in some regions all over the world. Although this could be caused by many issues, solutions can be taken to alleviate.

First and foremost, it is undoubted that the main problems resulting in food shortage can be various. Poverty in education can be listed as one of the most fundamental aspects leading people to low-self-awareness. They can give birth at high rates without tight control by government and as a result, it unintentionally becomes massive burdens on dealing with increasing food crisis. In addition, issues of hunger could stem from fighting for peace in consecutive wars amongst nations. Crops are destroyed and diseases spread in many areas; therefore, starvation is not an exception.

The possible measures to this global problem can be solved by short-term and long-term strategies. In terms of short-term tactics, it is encouraged to establish charity foundations that can raise funds to sponsor agricultural products and food for poor people. Health and medicine aids should be high priorities, particularly for local areas in which civil wars have lasted for decades and devastating infectious diseases have been painfully spreading. On the other hand, when we all take action to reduce thousands died of hunger all around the world, we need to have long-run solutions. It is vital to prevent nuclear power conflicts and build training centers for local residents.

In conclusion, many reasons can result in insufficient food supply all around the world, yet with the practical remedies, these problems could be addressed.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43410852713 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96411038316 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3502126888 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163131430761 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575863970109 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482136872237 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108654884494 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250967369552 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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