The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA
The given charts depict the percentage distribution of three nutrients (Sodium, Saturated fat, and added sugar) in four meals of the day in the form of pie diagrams.
Sodium which is a common nutrient recieved through table salt was found to be the highest (43%) in dinner which is 14% less than that found in lunch (29%). The amount of this nutrient was exactly equal to 14% for both snack as well as breakfast meals of the day
Saturated fat on the other hand had somewhat similar distribution in three meals namely breakfast(16%), snack (21%), and lunch (26%). However, the percent of the nutrient in question was higher in dinner as compared to any other meal which was 37 percent.
Last but not the least, added sugar was the most popular nutrient during the snack meal (42%) and was least taken during breakfast which was 16%.
In conclusion, it can be seen that sodium and saturated fat were the nutrients eaten during the dinner whereas added sugar was digested during the snack meal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...dium which is a common nutrient recieved through table salt was found to be the h...
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... highest 43% in dinner which is 14% less than that found in lunch 29%. The amount...
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...was exactly equal to 14% for both snack as well as breakfast meals of the day Saturated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73988439306 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31613815948 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6261452058 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 5.23603664747 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135105118621 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796543535364 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217240139004 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863986336227 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221480778291 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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