Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern life, the public tend to pay more attention to their physical well-being which can be improved by doing sports. While some people contend that team sports such as football can benefit individuals more significantly, others attach greater importance to solo sports such as tennis or swimming. Personally, I assert both types of sports can give players a huge number of advantages.
On the one hand, players can gain a myriad of benefits when playing team sports. Firstly, people are likely to hone their social skills, especially teamwork, through partaking in such sports. Because every team game requires effective cooperation and mutual understanding among players, gradually it can promote team spirit which is considered as an essential factor in almost all group projects. Furthermore, participating in team sports can also enable each individual to extend his or her social relationships. Indeed, at certain levels of life, people may encounter some challenges relating to their work or their personal lives. Those teammates, who they build rapports with when doing sports, therefore, are important sources of support and assistance.
On the other hand, individual sports do wonders to players in some other ways. One merit of this kind of sport is flexibility. To be more specific, people can actively opt for time and place that they feel comfortable and convenient to play since they do not have to comply with any regulations or fixed time table which should be a must in team sports. As a result, they can choose any time that suits them and make progress at their own pace. More importantly, if someone pursues sports as their future career, individual sports seem to be a more appealing option because it is easier for players of this kind to rise to fame. Meanwhile, playing in a team depends on many external factors that sometimes are out of their control.
In conclusion, each type of mentioned sports has its own advantages, but in general, both aim at improving people’s physical and mental health. Therefore, it is better for players to decide on which one is more suitable to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75621746128 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.751519478 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217030511988 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744040392389 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609785640293 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147740839377 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451344200358 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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