Playing sport is undoubtfully useful for people. It is often claimed by some that it is more profitable when a person participates in team sports, such as basketball and football, whereas others hold the opinion that individual sports, namely swimming, is beneficial. This essay will discuss both previously mentioned notions and from my point of view, I believe that playing in a team is advantageous.
Taking part in a single sport is indeed helpful for people for some reason. To commence with, it can help people to understand themselves as they face and attempt to solve their problems with their own hands. For example, most of the individuals who trained in wrestling and swimming often gained self-confidence and became more mature. Moreover, personal sports may be non-depressing. In other words, because they do not rely on others, they do not feel any pressure themselves as well as blame themselves.
However, team games have also advantages. Firstly, it will teach people communication skills which is essential for their future life when they are employed in companies. When residents play basketball or football, for example, they would learn human behaviours, respecting others, how to listening to each member and understanding them. In this way, they can expand their knowledge about humans and can be successful in their workplace. Another benefit of it is that it allows the person to solve problems in the team. They will acknowledge solving issues in public is more profitable rather than tackling them alone as many ideas are collected in order to reach the right decision.
In conclusion, although independent games help one to be confident and feel non-pressure, participating in team games also have merits, such as they help to learn communication skill and to solve problems in public. As far as I am concerned, I believe that playing team sports is more advantageous than taking part in a single game for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15457413249 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92205870775 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2568401623 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199948152437 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701618516743 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675618008075 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130773219105 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496622649892 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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