Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in team sports, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In recent year, playing sport is a matter of great concern to students and parents. Some people argue that playing team sports provides people with more benefits than participating in individual sports. Personally, I believe that both kind of sports bring the benefit for people and in my opinion, I chose play sports in team due to benefit suitably for my learning needs.
On the one hand, sports in team such as football, basketball, etc bring the benefit to those who play. Team sports give players develop interpersonal skills, especially teamwork and communicational skills. It will not only help them in their day-to-day social interaction, but also provide the benefit people in their work in the future. In addition, team sports will assist to develop a sense of unity, friendship, and sportsmanship between team mates, which can cooperate with team mates to add value to people's lives.
On the other hand, individual sports, like shooting, swimming, have some profit. When people usually play individual sports, they can enhance their personal skills. Specifically, they can manage emotions, cope with stress, and build confidence and self-esteem. Moreover, playing individual sports, no one back up during the game, they need to develop a strong mindset and overcome any setbacks they may face. Individual sports provide opportunities for people to challenge themselves by setting goals and achieving personal bests.
However, I think people should choose the team sports because it bring the benefit which may apply to the future such as cooperate with team mates or colleagues in the work. Team spirit will result in mutual support in all facets of life, ranging from academic studies through employment opportunities to personal relationships.
In conclusion, team sports and individual sports offer great benefit for people's mental and physical health, and that people should choose the sport in team due to playing sports in groups is superior to playing solo sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to play'
Suggestion: to play
...t for people and in my opinion, I chose play sports in team due to benefit suitably ...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...hould choose the team sports because it bring the benefit which may apply to the futu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72079234973 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3915718743 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274386332887 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10203063825 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707744399069 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169518889445 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461317964095 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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