It is clearly that the planting more tree in urban areas is very important. But some people provide more housing. That is not really good! In my point of view, planting more tree is the most essential thing in our life and I disagree with the builting more houses. Now, I will discuss about this phenomenon.
On the one hand, a total areas of the house account for a lot of superficiality in green space . Many trees will be cut down for builting new houses .This status lost beauty of green trees day by day.
On the other hand, although people increasingly need to build the houses to live , this work effects a lot to our life. Indeed, the more building houses, the carbon dioxide will be increased as oxi from the trees was just a little . It has caused global warming make our earth hotter.
To solve this matter, we will have some solution. Firstly, we need to have unite together to plant more trees where they live. Secondly, we ought to live in apartment or building to save spaces. Lastly, we must propaganda this problem and take part in activities about planting trees.
Generally, it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing.
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Sugar consumption is too harmful Some say it is governments responsibility to limit sugar intake while others say it s individual who are responsible Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 81
- Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57209302326 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31885611433 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1412698021 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2142857143 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399329793757 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144223017198 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172532021156 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258279790195 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214491835038 0.056905535591 377% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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