Nowadays, sugar consumption plays an essential role in our daily life.However, people use a lots leading to much harm for ourselves. There is been several ideas is that the folk are in the countries who are responsible and the contrary is that responsibility's government gets into sugar consumption of people. In my point of view, I both agree with two above ideas.
Junkfood is the biggest problem leading to overload using of sugar. Today, in along the streets, we are able to see that the foodstores have build and live complex. Therefore, the students and workers have breakfast at there so growth of sugar consumption is inevitable.In addition, somebody have so much work and they can't cook, so the best choice is that placing fast food online. Besides, junkfood tastes good than daily meals. One more thing is that, many people often take part in the party whose their friend at fastfood restaurant in long time in a week.
Thus, the folk will have measures to solve this matter.First, people need to have quality meals at home and decease fastfood eating. That helps us reduce a little money and will have a healthy body. Second, diminution of shopping for junk food and sweet drinks is also a good measure
Government also have solution of this. They should get up the taxes to reduce the customers of the fastfoodstores. Second, government need to have propaganda this message for everyone in order to that our life will better.
Sugar consumption is too harmful. Hence, everyone and government must have responsible to increase this phenomenon to take care of our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...ays an essential role in our daily life.However, people use a lots leading to much harm...
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...life.However, people use a lots leading to much harm for ourselves. There is been ...
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...mption of people. In my point of view, I both agree with two above ideas. Junkfo...
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...owth of sugar consumption is inevitable.In addition, somebody have so much work an...
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Suggestion: has
...ion is inevitable.In addition, somebody have so much work and they cant cook, so the...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: First
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...e this matter.First, people need to have quality meals at home and decease fastfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91791044776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69787215147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3498362631 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160365444586 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609553897918 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810026887988 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104117044968 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961873894298 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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