some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing to what extant do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics:

some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing to what extant do you agree or disagree.

It is scientific proven that,Plants and trees are very imperative for better environment in whole world.other considered that,owing to,Increasing population more and more houses should be lucrative.In my opinion,I agree with the statement.

There are manifold points to shore up my views,First and foremost,The increasing the pollution in all world is the main cause of mammoth problem.To be specific,The majority of masses use their own vehicles for commuting towards the other place.due to,growing more plants we should be controlled this concern because such plant inhale poisnious gases and exhale oxygen.Which help people to protect some illness.Secondly,we can see that,The massive number of people are suffering from much disease at hospital.which can adverse effect on their economic status.Therefore,Growing more and more tree and plant should overcome this money problem which help them to save their income for future time.

Next,Keeping better environment is very lucrative for layman life.To illustrate,Such tree and plants removes carbon dioxide and adopt dangerous gases.Which add charm in environment and human life safe and secure from these gases.

On the other hand,The majority of population is increasing day by day.Thus,we should build more house and apartment for living aristocratic life.which have beneficial for doing work around the clock.What is more,Making more house for employment is very worthwhile for people.To be specific,It is the best path to give some opportunity to mankind.such as,Best work hospital and so forth,It help them for completing their desire and dream.

To conclude,Both aspect have own significant.both are equal for maintaining the better environment.So,government should focus on growing trees and plants.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87209302326 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58490255803 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.240979305 49.4020404114 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.0 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.4 7.06120827912 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189675097057 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100850641711 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593600984016 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100850641711 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593600984016 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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