Some people think that computer and internet are important in children study but other think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachers.
discuss both sides and give your opinion
Computers and internet have brought enormous change in the field of education.the relative idea is supported by many peoples.while,some masses are in the opinion that schools and teacher play bags has en of heavy effective role in the career of farrows.In my perception,both the points are relevant and this essay will discuss on the significant importance of both.
To begin with,computer and internet provide various amenities to the students.First and foremost,the burden of heavy bags has released,which influences the nourishment of child.Secondly,visual and smart classrooms are much more interesting than boring traditional education system.students pay more interest in learning through advance mass-media.Moreover, they adhere with modern technology ,which in turn ease their access to higher studies of technology sector.Also they get wide range of career option as compared to earlier times.also,latest method of learning on internet,makes their study joyful and stress less.furthermore, students get plenty of time to spend on leisure activities rather than completing assignments,doing homework.
Along with, computers and internet,the role of teachers and schools in building the career of pupils can not be ignored.Teachers are like 'burning candle',who burn themselves to enlighten the future of their respective farrows.As schools and teachers are the basic platform,where student get to learn.They provide wards with adequate and convenient techniques of learning from their valuable life experiences.Also, it is evident in the case of many successful people that main pillar behind their success was their respective teacher and school.Moreover,they encourage their wards to uplift their career to desired point.Furthermore,they wipe out the obstacles in their path and enhances their knowledge to exorbitantly level.
Overall,it is crystal clear that,to uplift the education level of students both the given key-points must be pasteurized in a pleasant way so that awestruck result can be elaborated.only with the combination of both points they can achieve the magnificent doctrine of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96393442623 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84676384057 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.113400578 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 454.75 106.682146367 426% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.25 20.7667163134 367% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196517020742 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117870964248 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255143371862 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117870964248 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255143371862 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.8 13.0946893788 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.58 50.2224549098 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.3001002004 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.47 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.95 8.58950901804 151% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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