Is believe that spending money on constructing a healthy routine should be the priority rather than implemented taxes on curing sick people. In my point of view, both improving people's lifestyle and saving people are crucial and should be concentrating on equally.
To begin with, encouraging citizens to live healthily will bring several advantages. Educating one's consciousness in proving individual health will prevent people from disease's effect. For example, a person who is having a suitable diet will face fewer chances to meet obesity. Moreover, elevating citizen's awareness brings financial benefits. The less money spending on curing diseases, the more improvement witnessed in other fields. A prime example, one research has shown that the money which has been spent on Covid-19 could be used to deal with poverty or homelessness.
On the other hand, those who are suffering from sickness should not be neglected. Every existing species deserve an opportunity to live. Furthermore, the medical system is created for curing purposes. If there are no patients, hospitals, or any medical involved offices will not show any advantages. For instance, cancer hospitals are established for cancer patients. Indisputably success in healing people will give them hope or optimism, apparently, bring them the awareness to stay healthy.
In conclusion, it is explicitly that public funding will be more abundant if citizens have enough awareness about a good routine but that does not mean who got unexpected health problems should be abandoned in order to save money. Instead, both concentration and improvement should be invested equally.
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be what do you think are the causes of this what can be done to make families closer 78
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 84
- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons for immigration To what consequences can it lead 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
Is believe that spending money on constructing a h...
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Is) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
Is believe that spending money on constructing a h...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ill bring several advantages. Educating ones consciousness in proving individual hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50592885375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87629194478 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.24315773 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163485043311 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481542759652 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449984050664 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102674815337 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419854252974 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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