Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people can not always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinon.
In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether job satisfaction come first or job security comes first. It is put forward by some people that job security is the priority that it ensures our future financially and emotionally. Others, on the other hand, believe that the working environment is related to the quality of our lives, so the job should be suited to one’s value. This essay will identify both viewpoints surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some people who hold the view that employment security is the most important perspective when people selecting a job. These people present several arguments but the most persuasive one is perhaps that it secures our future financially and emotionally. In other words, there are a number of small business such as cafes and restaurants are repeating opening and bankruptcy, so that many businessmen struggle with financial difficulty and stress. However, those who employed at a big company are economically safe that even their offspring can receive the educational expenses from their company in some cases. Another point often made by the proponents of this view is that people become more confident when their careers build up. Challenge at their field every day can encourage them to improve their pride and values.
On the other hand, there are opponents of the former viewpoint as well. These people insist that people should choose their job depending on their preferences regardless of other’s expectation. One of the most convincing reasons they present is that people live only once and they have the right to enjoy their life. Today, many young people who prioritize the quality of their lives have obviously more experiences and skills than old generations that they establish small business leaning what they dreamed about such as barrister and leather crafting. As well as this, this is evidenced by the fact that people satisfied with their job may not only have less stress but also, they are physically healthier than those who work for their daily obligations. This is because these people have a flexible life and less pressure from the heavy workload.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are two contradicting viewpoints in relation to career choice. To choose which side I am on, I believe that job satisfaction is a more crucial point that far surpass job security viewpoint, owing to the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, such as, as well as, in other words, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63238032629 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.610628984 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415517523308 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123090160589 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906853115853 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247598204645 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00828408378546 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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