Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.
Which opinion do you agree with?
Raising pets along with children are considered as beneficial for the children by some, while others are wary of the dangers associated with it. I believe that it is not good for the children to live with pet animals as they may turn violent at any time and also have the potential to spread certain infections, like rabies, flu, etc.
The foremost problem is that these animals may sometimes become ferocious and attack the child. Children, unlike adults, may not understand the mood of pet animals and play with it accordingly. Victims, who are often the toddler age groups, end up being grievously hurt when the pet starts attacking and they loses their control over the animal. In Nevada, a dog breed named Rotweiller killed a 5-year-old boy, it grew up with, by bitting his throat and face. Thus, the moments in which a pet turns violent are always uninformed and unexpected.
Another reason to avoid having pet animals while having small children at home is infections. Animals are a major source of microbes for certain human diseases. If a child lives together with a pet animal, the child tends to come in contact with the animal’s saliva that drips, and the urine and feces that excretes, which contain plenty of germs to cause a number of diseases to the child. For example, the saliva of dogs is known to spread a deadly virus called rabies, to which 5 million people have lost their lives so far. Therefore, it is not safe to allow children to play around with animals.
In conclusion, Pet animals are thought to be dangerous to live with children, while the opposite is believed by some. In my opinion, pets, be it dogs or cats, the unpredicted mood of theirs in becoming violent and being the reservoir for certain infectious agents make pets totally unsuitable to exist with children
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
... when the pet starts attacking and they loses their control over the animal. In Nevad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80191693291 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48416475371 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6260197417 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275523728662 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101864689238 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818866715416 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187628058661 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703980808721 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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