Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.
Which opinion do you agree with?
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Raising a pet along with children is considered as
beneficial for the children by some, while others are wary of the dangers
associated with it. I believe that it is not good for the children to live with
pet animals as they may turn violent at any time and also have the potential to
spread certain infections, like rabies, flu, etc,.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Foremost problem is that these animals may sometimes become ferocious
and attack the child. Children, unlike adults, may not understand the mood of the
pet animals and play with it accordingly. Victims, who are often the toddler
age groups, end up being grievously hurt, when they lose their control over the
animal and the pet starts attacking. In Nevada, a dog breed named Rotweiller killed
a 5 year old boy, it grew up with, by bitting his throat and face. Thus, the
moments in which a pet turns violent are always uninformed and unexpected.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Another reason to avoid having pet animals while having small
children at home is infections. Animals are a major source of microbes for
certain human diseases. If a child lives together with a pet animal, the child
tends to come in contact with the animal’s fluid like urine and saliva, which
contain plenty of germs to cause a number of diseases to the exposed child. For
example, the saliva of dogs is known to spread a deadly virus called rabies,
which killed 5 million people so far by causing brain damage. Therefore, it is
not safe to allow children to play around with animals.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, Pet animals are thought to be dangerous to
live with children, while the opposite is believed by some. In my opinion,
pets, be it dogs or cats, becoming violent unpredictably and being a reservoir
for certain infectious agents make pets totally unsuitable to exist with
children<o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ertain infections, like rabies, flu, etc,.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02821316614 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.67780619565 2.80592935109 238% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5038306109 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.818181818 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199939876783 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904804488967 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493620026238 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069011063928 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764372344478 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.29 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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