Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, a lot of impressive buildings are constructed in many countries. They are considered tourist attractions. But other people believe that hospitals and schools need more attention from the government. They are less noticeable, this does not mean they are less essential. I think both of them should be invested to develop.
An impressive building can give to a city in several different ways. First of all, they bring benefits from tourism. When you visit any country, you notice the building that stands out. Tourists who want to see these building are willing to spend money. This brings income to local citizens. Secondly, the buildings can hold large-scale significant functions or events such as concerts, exhibition. Additionally, an impressive building can become a city’s icon. For example, Landmark 81 is the highest building in Viet Nam with 81 floors, glamorous sight. It’s one of the symbols for Viet Nam’s developing.
However, the government must also make sure that their citizens are looked after. If there aren’t enough schools or the schools are very old, the student won’t receive proper educations. Similarly, if citizens don’t have enough healthcare, they can’t work and serve their country. It makes the countries increasingly down.
In conclusion, I believe the government should spend some of their money on city buildings because they need to look after the global status of their country. However, they should also make sure that they have enough modern schools and hospital buildings. So that their citizens have good health and proper education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80073281632 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5344999444 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180390754277 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514591436472 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545988929444 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107141736874 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536483002516 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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