Some people think that learning the language and culture of a country is essential when you live in a country for a long time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes suggested that foreign person might leave in certain country for a long time, therefore this people will be able to stay like a native humans in the long run. I strongly agree that human may learn from unknown country all their habits and language. Firstly, this essay will discuss people’s adaptability, and secondly, it will analyze the possible events in human’s life.
The primary reason why person might easily study language and traditions of different country is that many humans are easily modify their habits. This is because people will be able to communicate with native speakers and participate anyone restaurants. As a result it is a golden opportunity for people to improve their communication skills with native speakers, also they will be took traditions of humans with modified vision to the world. A prime example is University of Oxford, which provided a research, where they was recognized that 63 per cent of people are learn new language during their life in unknown country.
Another point to consider is that all countries have own traditional events, which person may participate. The reason for this is that person will clearly ask for some early event, which people might participate. As a consequence this people will be recognized habits of native environment, and person might participate some tournaments for familiarize with their likely sport. For instance, University of Harvard was provided an experiment, where they send people to some events in certain countries, as a result humans was told about all traditions of exactly country after happening.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that learning the language and culture of a certain country is common process during people’s life in exactly country. This is due to the fact that person may easy adapt for new country and humans may participate some events with other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7760856053 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486928104575 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0039445571 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207230823769 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893218751919 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465697015503 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151576855859 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357027604553 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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