Some people think that live in a house is better than live in an apartment ,but others opinion say that there is more advantages live in an apartment.
Some people think that live in a house is better than live in an apartment ,but others opinion say that there is more advantages live in an apartment.
Some people prefer to live in a house,there maybe have some causes.One of them is,if man do not get used to live in an apartment,when man soon childhood get used to live in ahouse,where weather is fresh,where is many trees,where man can breathe easily.When you live in a house,you can feel comfort,tranquility,you can feel freely yourself.There are many housework for woman and men equally,when you work you do not be fat.The sun shines every day in the village,if your house in the village it is very good,because when you live in the village house you can get suntan and you never be ill.
Others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment,because soon childhood they live in an apartment and think that live there is better than in a house.There are more advantages and comforts in an apartment,because in the city thre is more modern technology.Who love live in a small house they are live in an apartments,because there are in each houses have garden or big field,in a one word we can say that who work,who is very busy,whose do not interest a house where he lives and who live alone,they can live in an apartment.
In my opinion live in a house is better than live in an apartment,because I love houses where have big field and a house with many rooms.When I live in an apartment,I feel that I am in small house where only technology.I do not feel comfort in an apartment.I think that who love live in an house,they live there,who want to live in an apartment ,they should live in an apartment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60200668896 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25028554183 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408026755853 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.95158282 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.0 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.596727881559 0.244688304435 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.530390405246 0.084324248473 629% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.263639487795 0.0667982634062 395% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.530390405246 0.151304729494 351% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263639487795 0.056905535591 463% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.0946893788 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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