In recent years, some individuals believe that international cooperation mainly brings advantage to the environment while others argue that more benefits are brought to the world business. In this essay, I would like to discuss both of these perspectives before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, cooperation among countries could have advantages impacts on the environment. Firstly, the environment has become increasingly polluted by green-house effects and global warming. This issue is impossible to be solved by only one individual or one country as cooperation among religion will bring more ideas and solutions. For example, scientists and environmentalists could research and invest in ways to save energy and process waste.
On the other hand, I still believe that there are more benefits to the world business from global cooperation. Firstly, it can encourage international investment which will help the economy develop by increasing the employment rate in each country. This will bring more job opportunities for citizens which will improve people's life standards. Secondly, cooperation among countries would help reduce the tax on international products, and citizens can easily approach other countries' products. In other words, more employment can be created and people's lives can be improved by global cooperation in business.
In conclusion, even though cooperation among countries will help to protect the environment easier, I believe that it will bring more benefits to the global economy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66086956522 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07467243556 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3721334299 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20778701654 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785246497956 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863185225231 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144949512669 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093112175828 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e individuals believe that international cooperation mainly brings advantage to t...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...among religion will bring more ideas and solutions. For example, scientists and e...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... standards. Secondly, cooperation among countries would help reduce the tax on ...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation among countries would help reduce the tax on international products, and ...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... countries would help reduce the tax on international products, and citizens can...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted and peoples lives can be improved by global cooperation in business. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66086956522 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07467243556 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3721334299 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20778701654 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785246497956 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863185225231 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144949512669 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093112175828 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.