Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss about opinions and give your give your opinion.
Over the past decades, the issues centering on child’s growth has triggered a heated debate and it has been discussed by many people. It has been believed by some individuals that social factors have effects on child’s growth, while others opine that family holds greater power to affect a child's behavior in the development stages. Both views will be followed by a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why there are factors external to the family that significantly impact on a child's development. Firstly, news reports shown on a television keep children updating with the latest information around the world. This could help them see things that will teach them about life. Secondly, another factor that exercises a great influence on a child's development is friends. Apart from television and the internet, children spend plenty of time with their friends and enjoy listening to music. Friends also has an important influence as a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. This could be a positive behavior but it could also be negative, such as smoking or text or taking drugs. Therefore, the rapid expansion of technology and cultural changes have significantly impacted the way in which a child will develop.
On the other hand, it is also understandable as to why family exerts the greatest influence on children. To begin with, parents and siblings used to be the first and fore most influence. Children are taught etiquette, code of ethics by parents at a very young age. Therefore, they might behave properly when communicating with others. Another reason is that children spend a huge amount of time being with parents at home and is easy for them to follow the way how problem are solved by their parents.
In conclusion, the mentioned suggest indicated that each view has the own its reasons. Although it is clear that factors such as music or friends have great effect on children, i believe that parents’ impacts seem to outweigh because they always stand by their children; hence, they will help them to take best advantages from social factors.
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- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 78
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00568181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61541441496 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576704545455 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5883050729 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167688428845 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524212917951 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528742697835 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995795648004 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550236949392 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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