Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to the developing of modern life, there are a wide range of methods which gradually replace traditional ones, and some people think that maintaining public libraries is wasting time compare with using digital technology. I completely disagree with above-mentioned point with the following reasons.
Firstly, spending time in public libraries helps people feel not only comfortable with the warm, friendly atmosphere but also urge yourself increase the concentration ability. Reading books reduce the stress after a hectic day. Moreover, when seeing the colleagues in this place, this brings more motivation to keep the mind focusing on finding more useful information. For example, in upcoming exams, students usually revise alone or with their classmate by taking a slot on school library which lead to speed up accumulating of knowledge. Therefore, public school play an essential role in relaxing and handling life force.
Secondly, digital technology has many benefits such as storing the number of information, seeking data easily. However, this could not replace one hundred percent of the advantages of connecting the relationships between people. Community place could boost your communication skills. Meeting many people every day helps you easier to catch friend, exchange messages and improve their confidence. It is surely that staying at home with a computer could not let have an open conversation or enough courage to make a presentation in front of a lot of people such as strangers or evenly your partners. As a result, instead of being passive as a teckie ??? and over-used digital life, you should maintain the habit of using the common libraries.
In conclusion, there are still many opinions about changing the role of public libraries, the dominance of spending time at this place could stimulate mindset and raise social competence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41780821918 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82024041767 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667808219178 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6076555482 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18282403256 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501507415976 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516981016821 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10500891801 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453966276869 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.