A person's behavior in adult life is hugely dependent on her overall development in her younger years. There are a number of factors which affect a child's mental and physical development. There is a difference in opinion, however, whether social media like TV and music along with friends play the most important role in this or the family is still the biggest contributor.
On one hand, these days children spend most of their time in front of the Television, consuming a wide range of audio visuals varying from educational like National Geographic to worthless like Ftv. Unless monitored closely their parents, children can fall prey to obscene and violent content which can leave a bad mark in young minds.Furthermore, music is also a quiet preferred source of enjoyment among children and is scientifically proven to have psychological benefits. However, I believe other than these means, friends play a major role in the behavioral development of their peers as it is said that "Birds of the same feather flock together".
On the other hand, I am also a firm believer of the fact that "one learns what one sees". As children spend most of their time at home, it can be said the family is one the most important influencer in a child's development. The parents/family are the first teachers of a child as it is them she observes after gaining enough consciousness. They in their child's best interest teach them the difference between right and wrong; shaping their mind for the future. Moreover, the family has the power to control a child's exposure to social media like Television and Music. They can also make sure that their child is always in the company of good friends.
Therefore, in conclusion, I believe that family plays the most significant role in all round development of a child. But at the same time the influence of Television, Music and friends is also substantial in this regard and cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
A persons behavior in adult life is hugely depend...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opment in her younger years. There are a number of factors which affect a childs ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ich can leave a bad mark in young minds.Furthermore, music is also a quiet preferred source...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96941896024 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91181284772 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.471226323 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205666739056 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712244218329 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346104694031 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126839173358 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161031403091 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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