The line chart depicts three types of fast food items(Hamburgers, Pizza, fish & chips) consumed by the population of UK over a period of two decades, from 1970 to 1990. The units are measured in grams per week.
Overall, Hamburger and Fish & Chips observed a sharp increase in consumption wherein hamburger ended up as the highest consumed fast food item among the three. In contrast, Pizza remained almost steady during the 20 years.
It is seen from the line graph that both Hamburger and Fish & Chips started with a very humble amount of less than 100 grams per week and rose steadily over the next decade amounting to around 90 for hamburgers and 150 for Chips & Fish. Thereafter, Fish & chips had a very sharp increase and almost doubled to 300 in 1985. Comparatively, Hamburgers rose to only 120 in the same year. In the year 1970, Fish & Chips went on to become the highest consumed fast food by reaching a value to 400 grams per week whereas Hamburgers even with their steady increase could only manage to reach somewhere less than 300.
The figure also shows how Pizza started out as the most favorite fast food in 1970 with the consumption value of 300 grams per week but slowly and steadily declined to 200 grams per week in 1985. In the year 1990, it however did show a slight increase by reaching to 210 grams per week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs and 150 for Chips & Fish. Thereafter, Fish & chips had a very sharp increase a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40734311377 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533898305085 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.832332519 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321752206284 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132078284385 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102999609375 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222022000337 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109653353297 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.