Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Many people assume that mental health is the most crucial contribution to succeeding in sports, whilst others consider strength and fitness the main factors for sports success. In my opinion, if we combine both these aspects, there will be more chances for athletes to achieve high prizes.
On the one hand, some individuals presume that having stable mental health leads to better achievements when participating in sports competitions. To be specific, mental health relates significantly to the motivation and determination of an athlete. Athletes can only thrive in sports when they enjoy every moment they devote to sports and are not under pressure to win a medal. If sports players have a healthy and stable mind, they will likely win the best prize because they feel relaxed and confident when performing their best. Moreover, good mental health also inspires players and increases their confidence when competing with others for renowned prizes.
On the other hand, many people support the idea that strong and fit athletes have a vital influence on success in sports. Firstly, athletes are able to compete with other well-built competitors if they are in good health condition. If sports players want to boost the possibility of winning, they must be strong enough to beat others. Therefore, to higher the chance of a first place in every sports competition, athletes need to have both strength and fitness.
In conclusion, mental health is an imperative contribution to the success of sports players, but athletes will likely lose if they lack sufficient strength and fitness. I agree with the idea that athletes will thrive in every sports match if they have both of these factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...er the chance of a first place in every sports competition, athletes need to have both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16727272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64930990547 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8456575631 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242097240873 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940683246353 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701995014331 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16757207191 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685523177642 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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