Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
many people view modern technology is the source to make them sociable while other think it's to be unsociable.
different scientific innovations creates humans to adjust in the society. Advanced communications made the global closure, interacting with various persons connecting with culture, life styles and way of living. Habits, techniques, learning with practical through email and internet encloses personnels to see each other in nearer perspective, knowing traditions, values and norms. they share feelings and ideas along with their religion, work and know to express languages of different countries.
technology in the modern century is very essential without which humans becomes unable to aquint to daily activities. The daily needs and facilities cannot be obtained in the same locality. many equipments are imported and exported from various places to fulfill the daily requirements. aquinting with various people of different countries creates to business deal, which cannot be posssible without being sociable. knowing to respect others is also being sociable and for which discipline is very essential. as there is a proverb "discipline is something like a shadow that falls us whenever we go", which is the most important part to become sociable.
technology has not only made people sociable but also it has made people less sociable. Today's world has changed into commercialization. Almost 80% of the people are very busy and running after money. they donot have time to give even to their family. they are dediacated to their work only. they have become one sided. they donot have time to engage with others. when ritual functions, when people gets trouble and death ceremony is observed, there are only few people to attend. there are no one to help them.
Despite the advantages and disadvantages, I believe that technology has made people to see eath other in closure prospective with their life styles, culture and with different technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46278317152 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8176348967 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.154207936 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.380952381 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225867915214 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588256230215 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964579090054 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149927684702 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137146161312 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.