some people think that in this modern world, people are getting dependent on each other while others think the modern world makes people more independent of each other discuss both views and give your own opinion
There is a hot debate about whether the relationship between people is getting more and more dependent or not, some people holding the opinion that people are more dependent on each other, in the meantime, others think the modern society makes people more independent. In my opinion, these two aspects exist at the same time and there is no conflict between them.
The competition is getting more intense as well as the live cost is getting more expensive, so people work hard at their jobs and often work overtime.
So they don’t have enough time to do everything by themselves, such as gardening, cooking, doing laundry, and cleaning their house, they would rather hire others to do for them and others use this opportunity to earn money. so people might be more dependent on others in this aspect.
Nowadays, people can live without any interpersonal activity, and the interaction between people is getting less too. For example, people used to know their neighbors well, but now they don't even know their neighbors. In the meantime, people use APPs in every aspect of their life, they chat on Messager, make friends on Facebook, the real-life relationship with others becomes less, which means people are more independent on others.
In my opinion, with urbanization as well as economic development, the social division of labor becomes more and more specific, which means people are more tend to focus on their own job and dependent on other social roles to help them with other stuff. In the meantime, people can live a life without interaction with other people because of urbanization and technology development. So that is the reason why I think people are dependent and independent on each other at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03103448276 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62364851116 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9186848682 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444906793125 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196222135742 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137649540674 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261465688689 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121875889037 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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