Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, people hold various views as to whether we are becoming more or less reliant on each other. Whereas there are some persuasive arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that humans have grown to be more independent.
On the one hand, it is indisputable that people often rely on each other in some respects. First of all, life is getting more complex and difficult than ever before since the cost of living is increasing dramatically, which forces a majority of parents to work harder in order to make ends meet. Accordingly, they don’t have much spare time and thus have to depend on grandparents or babysitters for childcare. On top of that, as property costs are also higher than ever, only with the aid of parents are many young people able to pay for a deposit and a mortgage.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that individuals are more self-sufficient these days. First and foremost, there has been a considerable reduction in the number of extended families over the past few years, which means that families are getting smaller and more dispersed and that people cannot count on their relatives as much as they used to. Furthermore, it is considered by many that people rely on machines rather than depend on each other. For instance, owing to technological advancements, it is more likely that we can conduct research by ourselves or look for relevant materials on the Internet instead of asking friends for help.
By way of conclusion, while there are some reasons to claim that individuals nowadays are more independent, my own viewpoint is that we are now leading more independent lives than ever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ay’s society, people hold various views as to whether we are becoming more or less reliant on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for instance, first of all, more or less, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85563380282 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75988736693 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9942469612 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328182085238 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126245614276 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835466999341 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207478961288 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531198027306 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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